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干货|家庭类话题雅思写作范例

2016-09-28

来源:南通环球教育

小编:Eileen 115
摘要:

  雅思A类写作Task2一直是很多考生在考试中无法把握的一大项,其中关于outweigh的问题虽然不常见,但写法难度较大,具有一定的技巧性。在这里,南通环球教育(原环球教育)名师陈羽静老师将以double income family 这一常见题目给出范文和思路指导。希望大家有所帮助。

  此类问题需要考生从正反两面来分析论点,具体的来说即此类现象的优势和劣势。双收入家庭的优势:1.给孩子提供足够的经济支撑来满足将来的教育需求甚至出国深造的可能;2.孩子独自在家照顾自己可以培养独立能力。

  双收入家庭的问题:缺乏家长行为规范,孩子容易被不良现象所感染。

  在分析完利弊后,考生应明确此类文章的结构:introduction-advantages(本人支持观点)-表明观点段(即使会有如下弊端,本人认为利大于弊)-conclusion(再次表明立场)

  以下为原题和范文:

  In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go to work. While some say that the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of parents' absence. What are your opinions on this?

  There are widely differing views on the issue of whether both parents should secure employment. Some people argue that parental absence gives rise to the problem that children may feel they have a lack of support. However, I believe that double income families secure children's life financially and cultivate their independence.

  To begin with, children from dual income families provided with adequate financial support. In my country, the past few decades have witnessed increasing prices of food and other life necessities. Thus, with increasing family expenditure, children are not only be provided with sufficient food and clothing, but also fancy toys and books that they are interested in. Moreover, if family income is higher, parents can afford to send their children to private schools or even universities in addition to an array of courses to improve their foreign language skills. Additionally, children may have chances to travel abroad and which can broaden their horizons. Furthermore, children's independence is cultivated if both of their parents have full-time jobs. They may be able to take care of themselves and even perform some housework duties. For instance, when parents are absent, they could learn to do laundry, tidy up rooms and even cook simple dishes. These skills ssist thembecoming more independent if they have to go to other cities for further education.

  Nonetheless, those who detract from this argument believe that finances are less imperative than spiritual factors, since children could feel lonely and forgotten and they couldbecome involved in a diverse number of malevolent deeds such as taking drugs and joining gangsters. However, specific school sessions and appropriate monitoring can prevent these negative behaviors. Thus, I believe that the drawbacks of both parents going to work are immediately dwarfed because of the advantages it can bring about.

  In conclusion, I believe that children can benefit from families with a double income in the aspect of sufficient financial support and self-independence. Although this point view seems to have a few demerits, they can be tackled with practical measures.

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