来源:南通环球雅思学校
小编: 433本次小作文是两个table,分别给出了五个地区在2006年的土豆人均消耗和总产值。
注意本次题目并无时间变化,因此我们应该将按照地区进行对比。
在table 1里,可以看出
1:人均消耗量由高到低排序是:Europe>North America> Asia / south and central America (以下简称SCA)> Afica;
2: Europe 和 north america 的数据分别是 Asia / SCA 的约4倍和2倍;Africa仅为ASIA/SCA的一半多
在table2里,可以看出:
1:年产量由高到低排序是:Asia(略大于Europe)> North America>Africa(略大于SCA)
2: Asia和europe的产量都分别达到了NE的五倍或更多,而Africa和SCA与NE的差距则很小,在8~10百万吨之间
注意,前面内容都只是将单张图内部信息进行对比。考生只要能将上面的信息描述清楚,就可以达到6分或以上了。
如果考生想要更高分数,就必须将两张图一起进行综合比较得出推论:
由两张图综合比较可以看出,消耗量最高的NE的年产值和其产量有很大缺口;年产值最高的ASIA的消耗量却仅是其产量的20%不到,因此,可以得出推论:大部分亚洲地区的产量都用于出口北美和欧洲用于填补缺口了。
真题 :A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefits cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference causes ? How might these problems be reduced ?
题型:报告
类别:社会发展
题目解释:城市和乡村地区的生活水平发展不均;问可能导致的问题 和 解决方案
分段解析
开头段:由于本题是报告类,因次开头段只要引出话题并告诉考官将讨论problems and solutions 即可。
参考:
The significant improvement in the standard of living in a country has sparked a major dispute in the whole society. Some people argue that this only bring advantages for cities rather than rural areas. Correspondingly, this issue poses a vast number of problems such as overpopulation, seriously damaged environment, which can harm the people's lives. My writing will go into further analysis of the problems and introduce some instant measures to tackle them.
主体段1
开头句:总体说明该情况可能带来不好的影响。
关键词句推荐:The imbalance between the standard of living in cities and that of countryside poses a variety of possible painful repercussions.
分论点1:城乡生活发展不均会导致农村居民大量向城市聚集,给公共设施带来负担
关键词句推荐:Firstly, it is clear that when the quality of life of city dwellers is improved, many people in rural areas tend to move to the cities seeking better lives.
As a result, the cities would soon become too crowded with large number of people living in them,and this would result in deterioration of many important services such as health, transport, education etc.
分论点2: 发展不均可能带来不满和动荡
关键词句推荐:that the standard of living in cities outpaces that in the countryside may give rise to the discontent and social unrest.
主体段2
开头句:总体说明可以采取一些措施。
Nevertheless, many initiatives could be adopted to effectively ameliorate the problem.
措施1: 政府可以采取有利的财政政策和投资计划来发展农村经济,进而提高生活水平。
关键词句推荐:A favorable policy and an investment program should be implemented in rural areas to foster the local economy and thus living standard.
措施2:政府也可以将力气花在直接提高农村基建上。
关键词句推荐:Another more direct measure can be upgrading infrastructure in the countryside such as electricity system, amusement centers, schools, medical clinics.
结尾段:重申可能的问题和方案