来源:南通环球雅思学校
小编: 528本次的小作文属于比较简单的table题,给出了两个时间点内6个行业的劳动力百分比,共计12个数据。
在数据题里,我们一定要写2样东西:极值和趋势,这幅图里我们可以一段写manufacturing
和 retail,因为这两个行业都是下降的走向;再一段分析剩下的四个行业(都是上升);这
两个段落里都必须突出最大值和最小值。
很多人认为 it is human right to use water as much as possible, 另外一些人认为the government should tightly control water usage. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题型:讨论双方观点的议论文。
话题:该题看似是新题(水的使用),但实质上还是老题重现(水本身就是一种资源,而关
于自然资源类的题目相信大家已经都训练了不少了)。下面,我们以不同分数要求为分类,
分别给出6~6.5分和7分或以上的写法
大部分同学(目标分数6~6.5)可以采取比较稳妥的四段写法,即按照题目要求(discuss
both views) 主体段一段讨论人们使用水的权利,另一段讨论政府应该控制水的使用。
主体段一:
人们有权使用freshwater, 因为它不但是人类的共有资源;而且人们需要它来保
障自己的生存。
People should be entitled to the usage of freshwater, for it is the resource shared commonly by the whole race.
关键词:be entitled to ; share ; race
Besides, freshwater, as clean air and food, is the indispensable part in human beings' lives.
关键词: indispensable
在本句中, 如果不加上" as clean air and food", 该句的语法和意义仍然是正确的, 但作为
雅思作文主体段的开头句,就会显得内容缺少丰富性。
尽管人们有使用淡水的权利, 但这并不意味着人们可以滥用它(会导致水资源
浪费),所以政府应该介入其中发挥自己的作用,防止水资源枯竭。
The fact that freshwater has long been seen a basic right to ensure human survival does not justify the overuse of it.
Excessive usage often leads to water scarcity.
Therefore, the government should step in and prevent water exhaustion from happening.
关键词: ensure; survival; justify; excessive; scarcity; step in; exhaustion
注意本段第一句其实是起到了"承上启下"的作用。
想要7分或以上的同学,结构自己自由选择,观点可以参考如下:
尽管我们都按期缴纳"水费账单",但水并不是一种商品,而是一种资源。 这种资源只能
被使用或循环利用,而不能被生产出来。
因此,有些人的观点"我为水的使用付费了了就可以按照自己的需求和意愿来使用它"是不
负责任的。
Frequent use of the term" water consumption", together with the fact that we pay for our water bills on a regular basis, has made us almost forget that water, as air and soil, is not a type of commodity, but a gift from nature.
This gift is used and reused but it can not be produced, at least not with current technology.
Hence, while some people believe that they have every right to consume water as they need and wish to, I believe such idea is not only unrealistic but also socially irresponsible.